Adweek put out a list of the best Facebook Marketing Campaigns of the past year. The Ice Bucket Challenge was the obvious winner and several others did really well, including Always’ Like A Girl campaign.

They also lauded the success of Budweiser’s Buds for Buds campaign.

Certainly, offering free beer is going to increase sales in the short-term¹, and that was Adweek’s measure of success for the original campaign. For Budweiser, thrown into uncertain conditions by the booming craft beer industry, any increase, even at the expense of margins, might be very satisfying. They certainly did some things well. In particular, the campaign did a good job of lowering the cost of the good without lowering the perceived value of it, which is a key struggle for brands that use sales. I also tend to believe it brought in alternate consumers rather than cutting the price for those who would have bought Bud anyway.  

However, the ad included in Adweek’s list is actually for the follow-up campaign promoting the success of their Buds for Buds campaign. While the initial campaign ad may have been a success the promotion of that campaign (which was a much bigger project) could have done a lot better. Let’s take a look at that ad. Unfortunately you’ll have to view it here and come back.

Doesn’t the over-dramatic writing makes it seem ungenuine? There are certainly a few points where it could be improved. The thing to focus on is that most consumers understand there is a bias in advertising and view ads critically. Thus, making overly dramatic claims in turn gets consumers overly critical.  Let’s zero in on the first paragraph. Take a look at what it says:

“Budweiser’s been a part of American life for almost 150 years.
For generations handing a friend a Bud has said more than words ever could.
But you can’t always be there for the moments in life that matter,
And as much as social media has helped us stay in touch with each other’s lives,
The truth remains, a like is still not as powerful as a high-five, a heart isn’t a hug, and nothing’s as meaningful as handing someone an iced cold beer.”

It’s not terrible, but do you really want to overstate your case as much as “handing a friend a Bud has said more than words ever could”? Put that together with “Nothing’s as meaningful as handing someone an iced cold beer” and, especially as a beer on the lower end of the spectrum, you might be getting laughed at. Nostalgia’s not a bad start for Budweiser, combine that with a lower price point and you might be able to start moving product. Here’s something less clumsily direct that could play out better:

“Budweiser’s been a part of American life for almost 150 years.
We were there when Ruth hit 713 and when Aaron hit 755.
We were there when Armstrong ‘hit’ the moon.
We’re still here.

Handing a friend a Bud still says “Thank you”, “congratulations”, or “well done”
Unfortunately, you can’t always be there for the moments in life that matter,
And as much as social media has helped us stay in touch
The truth remains, a like is still not as powerful as a high-five, a heart isn’t a hug, and nothing’s better than grabbing a beer with a friend.

Which is why we created Buds for Buds
So friends could share beers, no matter the distance, as easily as they share anything else online.
And they have, with thousands of Budweiser’s travelling millions of miles through facebook, text, and email.
For birthdays, promotions, bachelor parties, and for… people who just thought it was cool

We brought the age old tradition of buying a friend a beer into the digital world
Proving that buying a Bud for a bud is as relevant today as it was in 1876.
Something’s will never change.

Budweiser:
Be there. Even when you can’t be.”

1. In terms of product moved if not necessarily revenues. Though you’d certainly hope that increases as well.